Name: Complete
Peer Assessment by Rhys: You have colours that don't clash so they match with each other. You could vary the background colour more.
I have added a masthead that is in a style that suggests the genre and who the target audience might be. I have featured cover lines and a main cover line that show the features in the magazine. The background is red which signifies darkness and blood, the picture of Kian shows the reader the genre due to Kian wearing dark leather and playing the guitar.
I could vary the colour and variation on the background to add more emotion and contrast to the background. I could refine Kian's hair due to it being imperfect at the moment. I could add more cover lines that are even smaller. I could add a free CD sign on the cover as well.
I have added a free CD sign, I have changed the filter on Kian to make him more stylised and fitting. I have changed the cover lines and the name to make it more relevant to the genre
This is a massive improvement - matches genre conventions more.
ReplyDeleteNTT - think about font size, style and placement